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問題文 次のテーマについて８０語以上の英語で書きなさい
If you should travel abroad fot the first time in your life, would you like to travel by
yourself or would you like to travel with your friends? and why?
自分の答え I would like to travel by myself because I would like to have free time that is not
limited anyone.
If I traveled abroad with my friends, I might not go to the place where I have really
wanted to visit.
But if I traveled abroad by myself, I could go to the place where I have really
wanted to visit and it would be very interesting.
That is why I would like to travel abroad by myself better than with my friends.
お礼
ありがとうございます。