英文添削おねがいします。
自分が今の仕事を選んだ理由を英文で書きました。
添削よろしくお願いします。
I was working as a guide helper when I was a university student. I chose the work related with the person with autisms because of that.
I was mental disabilities person's guide helper. However, there were person with autisms in that, too.
I had gone out to various places with them on the weekend.
But there were a lot of people who have taken a turn in the park during a day.
And some people went to the same place every time.
When I went out with the person, who lives in group home,
She said "I don’t know why I am here, and I want to go home.” And she cried.
At that time, I was working as a part-time job.
Therefore, I did not neatly know their detailed situations.
But I doubted that "Is their life good as today?" in many times.
Of course, there were a lot of happiness and goodness, too.
However, doubted things very strongly impression in me.
So I thought that I want to help the individuals diagnosed with autism to be able to spend the full life happier than now.
Therefore, I have chosen the current job that was able to be more deeply related with the person with autism.
お礼
ありがとうございます。 あ！more smallじゃなくてsmallerなんですね。あとfewer。勉強しなきゃですね。。。 大変たすかりました。