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質問

自分で書いて英語詞です
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the memory of spending it together
it's seeming to disappear few
how many things have i done
that i wanted to do with you

i believed what you said and thought
that you would be back someday
im still waiting you

do you see how much i need you?

you dont stay with me
even if i wish so much
even if i wanna hear your voice
you dont let me do so
but i cant dislike you

everytime i part from you
i hold my tears so you won't notice

if i cried
i wonder if you'd come back
what can i do for you to come back here?

im still
looking for the answer

do you see how much i need you?

you always disappear from here so easily
you dont tell me anything true
it hurts this much
but i cant dislike you

i wonder if we could go back like befoe
there's a me that's still expecting
but the more i expect the more it becomes painful
so much that i cry
i know how much i want to see you
i really need you

回答No.1

Beepapa

内容についてはノーコメントにしておきますが、
英語の詩や歌詞は、日本語の曲よりも遥かに「韻」というものにこだわります。
古典的な曲だけではなく、新しいロックやポップス、ラップなどの多くに「韻」が見られます。
印象に残る詩や歌詞を、あえて英語で書きたいのであれば、「韻」について意識する必要が
あるでしょう。

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