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こんにちは、至急英文に直して下さい！習っていない言葉ばっかりなので・・。よろしくお願いします。
Dear マイケル
こんにちは、おかわりなくお元気でしょうか？この前は手紙を受け取ってくれてありがとう。もう少しで、あなた達が、アメリカへ帰ってしまう、と考えるとすごく寂しいです。もっとあなたとお喋りしたかったから。私は、あなたのファンだと手紙に書いたけど、実は私も日本で合唱をやってるからなの。だから、君が緊張しながらも、一生懸命歌う姿に共感したの！一人で歌う時（ソロ）は本当に勇気がいるものね。私も７月にソロで（曲名）を歌うんだよ。一杯練習するよ！なぜならあなたの様に上手に歌える様になりたいから！　それでは、あなたから手紙をもらえることを祈っています。またお会いしましょう。　さようなら。

回答No.4

Maiar · ベストアンサー

分かりやすい簡単な文章にしてみました。

Dear Michael.
Hello. How have you been?
Thank you for receiving my letter.
By the way,I knew you'll go back to U.S.A.
I”ll miss you.
I wanted to talk more with you.
In the letter I sent, I said, ”I’m a fan of yours.”　
In truth, I join the chorus in Japan.
I was impressed you sang as do your best even though you might be nervous.
I thoungt you were great,because you had the courage to sing a solo.
I’m going to sing (曲名) a solo in this July.
I’m going to practice singing hard, because I want to be sing very well like you.
I hope you write a reply to my letter.
I want to see you again! Bye.

お礼

みなさんの英語力に感動です！本当にありがとうございました！すごく助かりました！

回答No.3

hellotoear

ニュアンスが合っているかどうか分かりませんが、若い人が友人に向けて出すような手紙にしました。中学生レベルの英語ですいません。

Michael,
Hi, how are you doing? I thank you for your kindness of receiving my letter then. I feel so depressed that you are going to leave for U.S.A. I wished I could talk with you more.
I said that I am your fan in that letter. I enjoy chorus in Japan. I was impressed that you were eager to sing though you looked feeling nervous. I know that it is really tough for us to sing in solo. You must have called up all your courage.
I am expected to sing (曲名) in solo in July. I should practice hard and hard since I want to improve myself in singing like you.
I would appreciate it if you could send me a letter.
See you again.
Bye.

Love (自分の名前)

お礼

みなさんの英語力に感動です！本当にありがとうございました！すごく助かりました！

回答No.2

noname#11406

ここなんかどうですか？

参考URL：

http://honyaku.yahoo.co.jp/

お礼

みなさんの英語力に感動です！本当にありがとうございました！すごく助かりました！

回答No.1

noname#11386

Dear Michael
Hello are you energetic without the change?Thank you for receiving the letter ahead of this. It is terrible and lonely when thinking that you return to the United States a little more. Because it wanted to chat to you more. . of though written that I am your fan in the letter. chorus it to tell the truth also by me in JapanTherefore, it sympathized with the appearance sung hard though you felt nervous. When singing alone (solo), the really courageous one. I also sing solo (name of a song) in July. It practices fully. Because singing well like you wants to become possible. Then, it prays to be able to get the letter from you. Moreover, let's meet. Good-bye.

参考URL：

excite

お礼

みなさんの英語力に感動です！本当にありがとうございました！