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質問

By compare workers who graduates high school with four-year college, wages is a difference of about 1.8 times.
Workers who serve in large company is far more than high school by comparison with four-year college.

「高卒と４大卒の賃金を調べると約１・８倍も違う。
大企業に勤めている人は４大卒の人の方がはるかに多い。」

（大企業という言い方なのですが、参考にした本でlarge companyと記載があったのでそのまま使用します）

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回答No.1

Nakay702 · ベストアンサー

＞By compare workers who graduates high school with four-year college, wages is a difference of about 1.8 times.
Workers who serve in large company is far more than high school by comparison with four-year college.
＞「高卒と４大卒の賃金を調べると約１・８倍も違う。
大企業に勤めている人は４大卒の人の方がはるかに多い。」
⇒以下のとおり、語句・添削文・別の例をお答えします。

（語句）
＊AとBを比べると：Comparing A with B。
＊高卒の賃金(と)４大卒の賃金：the wage of high school graduates (and) that of four-year college graduates。
＊AはBの約1.8倍です：A is about 1.8 times B。
後者（の～）は前者のそれの約1.8倍です：the latter is about 1.8 times that of the former。
＊（彼らは）高卒者よりも４年制大卒者の方が圧倒的に多い：(They are) overwhelmingly over 4-year college graduates than high school graduates。

（添削文）
Comparing the wage of high school graduates with that of four-year college graduates, the latter is about 1.8 times that of the former.
People who work for large companies are overwhelmingly over 4-year college graduates than high school graduates.
（高卒の賃金と４年制大卒のそれを比べると、後者は前者の約1.8倍です。
大企業で働いている人たちは、高卒者よりも４年制大卒者の方が圧倒的に多い。）

（別の例）
The wage of a 4-year college graduate is about 1.8 times higher than that of a high school graduate.
In large corporations there are much more university graduates than high school graduates.
（４年制大卒者の賃金は高卒者のそれより約1.8倍も高い。
大企業には、高卒者より４年制大卒者の方がずっと多い。）

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回答No.3

princelilac

「四年制」と説明するまでもなく、college は四年制ですので省きます。

　Workers who get through college earn 1.8 times as much wages as workers who get through college.

　In large companies, great more workers are from college than high school.

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回答No.2

double_triode

Comparing the average wage of high school graduates with that of four-year college graduates, the latter is 1.8 times larger. Four-year college graduates occupy a large portion of employees in large companies

いつものように，完全に書き直さないとだめだと思います。お礼は書かなくていいですよ。私は自分のボケ防止のために書いてますから。

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