英文の添削をお願いします

質問

英文の添削をお願いします。去年のプレゼンテーションは３年生と４年生に分けてグループを作っていましたが、今年は学年混ぜてプレゼンテーションを行ってほしいです。という英文ですが、
　We held presentations dividing 3rd year students and 4th year students last year, but this year, we want you to form groups mixing 3rd year students and 4th year students. という文章でいいですか？

回答No.1

Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

We held presentations with 3rd year students and 4th year students separately last year, but this year, we want you to form groups with 3rd year students and 4th year students mixed up.
でどうでしょうか。

私なら
Juniors and seniors were in separate groups when we had presentations last year, but this year, we want you to have both juniors and seniors in each group.
としたいですが。

お礼

ありがとうございます！