先日、英訳してもらったのですが、どちらがいいですか？
先日、英訳してもらったのですが、どちらがいいですか？
英訳してくださった方には感謝しております。
で、どちらの文章がどんな印象で伝わるのか
いまひとつ理解できないのですが、
一般的にはどちらがいいですか？
(1の英訳)
Thank you for your e-mail.
I don't think we will have any problems with US-Japan shipment.
On receipt of the item, I will let you know.
I sell Japanese antiques on ebay auction, and purchase foreign antiques as well.
I would sure like to win a bid when you put attractive items on the auction again in future.
I hope we will be able to build good partnership in future.
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(2の英訳)
Thank you for your email.
There shouldn’t be any problem with shipment between the U.S. and Japan.
Will let you know as soon as I receive your goods.
At ebay, I sell Japanese antiques and purchase foreign antiques as well.
Would be very much interested in bidding again next time you put attractive items on the marketplace.
Looking forward to doing business with you in the future.
Best regards,
お礼
ありがとうございます。このような並列をする表現が英語では一般的ではないということなのでしょうか。「Confuse」の原因になりうるような気がしますし。