英文が正しいか教えてください。
英文が正しいか教えてください。
Second, I talk about society.
Now, society judges a person by external appearances.
For example, if my hair is blond, people would judge me and say “she is fool.”
I watched one movie when I was 15 years old.
The movie story is about blond hair girl.
She’s hair is blond. But she is very smart.
This is the fact.
Now, but, judge a person by external appearances not only people but also society.
Society is a big group.
We don’t judge a person by external appearances.
But I think that we have to change society.
If people don’t judge a person by external appearances, we could accept people have many things.
That’s why I agree with one should never judge a person by external appearances.
間違っているところなどがあれば教えてください。
よろしくお願いします。
