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I was looking for someone who feel free to talk to
and making efforts to get along with people near where I live,
but nobody payed attention to me.
It was just unbelievable that I got a message from you far from here.

添削をお願いします。

回答No.1

cbm51901 · ベストアンサー

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I was looking for someone to whom I could talk openly and freely. So I made efforts to get along with people around me, but nobody paid attention.
It was just unbelievable that I got a message from you so far away.