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If you could travel back in time to meet a loved one, what person would you like to meet and why?
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If I could travel back in time, I would like to meet my great grandfather who died when I was very young. The main reason I would like to talk to him about his interesting life. He was a city mayor. At that time, the city was not adequately-resourced health service. For improving medical care system, he made a great effort to make hospital complex. Additionally, he loved his family. Since he was very busy, he could not meet his children, so, he called to them from his office, writes a letter, and recorded his voice to let them read a picture book. I would like to talk to him about love and serve people.
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添削していただき、ありがとうございます。 なるほど。 want to とwould like の違い、とてもよくわかりました!! 参考になりました。 ありがとうございます。