大学入試問題 和文英訳 添削願い

質問

しばらくの間スペインに住み、地元の人たちと親しくなることで、私たちは自分たちの国の良い点と悪い点に気付かされた。

Ｉ lived in Spanish for the time being and I became be familiar with local people.
These things made me find our country's well points and bad points.

とてもがっかりしたことに、様々な機能の付いた最新の電子辞書は人気があるので売り切れていた。

To my great disappointment, the latest electronic dictionaries which have a lot of functions were so popular that they were sold out.

お願いします。
英語の勉強がんばります！

回答No.1

Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

しばらくの間スペインに住み、地元の人たちと親しくなることで、私たちは自分たちの国の良い点と悪い点に気付かされた。
添削→Ｉ lived in Spain for the time being and I became familiar with local people there. These things made me find our country's good points and bad points.
訳例
I lived in Spain for a while. As we became familiar with local people there, we came to find some good points and bad points of our country.

とてもがっかりしたことに、様々な機能の付いた最新の電子辞書は人気があるので売り切れていた。
To my great disappointment, the latest electronic dictionaries which have a lot of functions were so popular that they were sold out.
→これはよいと思います。
訳例
To my great disappointment, the latest electronic dictionaries with a whole variety of functions in them were so popular that they were already sold out.

以上、ご参考になればと思います。

お礼

ありがとうございます！！