英作の練習でグローバリゼーションについて書いてみたのですが、今までほと
英作の練習でグローバリゼーションについて書いてみたのですが、今までほとんど英作などはしたことがないので添削をしてほしです。手探り状態で書いたので数多くの改善点があるかもしれませんがよろしくお願いします。
Globalization has both merits and demerits.
First, thanks to it, we can communicate with foreigners and contact with foreign cultures.
In that way, we can have wide discrimination.
If we contact with foreign cultures, we may notice importance and essentially of own culture. But, we may feel foreign culture is better than ours.
If so, our culture becomes outdated.
Second, the Internet, which is a factor of globalization, brings information of all over the world to us.
If we use the Internet, we can get information in many languages.
Also, if we ask questions on it, somebody who is sitting in front of PC answers them in about an hour.
But, with the spread of the Internet, reading books may become less important.
Books have value that the Internet doesn’t have.
If books disappear from the world, cultures may also disappear because books are full of the country’s language, idea and knowledge.
Finally, globalization’s merits are also globalization’s demerits.
