英語短文の添削お願いします。

質問

ICUの入学願書に英語で記入しなければいけない項目があるのですが、間違った英文で提出するのも気がひけるので添削お願いします。

I want to enter ICU to learn economics and English command because I wish I greatly work not only in japan but also abroad.

And through ICU I come to think complexly and flexisibly, so I will be able to　change myself and grow up excellently.

「日本だけでなく海外でも活躍できるように、ICUに入って経済学と英語を学びたい。

そして、ICUで複合的かつ柔軟な思考を手に入れて、自分自身を変え、大きく成長できるようになるでしょう。」

日本語原文もおかしかったら訂正頂けると嬉しいです^^

よろしくお願いします！

回答No.1

jpintexas（@jpintexas） · ベストアンサー

>I want to enter ICU to learn economics and English command because I wish I greatly work not only in japan but also abroad.

I am applying to the department of economics at the ICU because the program offers a very high quality of educational opportunity in terms of academic standard and cultural diversity.

>And through ICU I come to think complexly and flexisibly, so I will be able to　change myself and grow up excellently.

The ICU is the best school for me to cultivate a set of comprehensive skills that are indispensable to a competent, mature and responsible citizen in a civil society.

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回答ありがとうございました！