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しかし失敗を完全に回避することはできない。

失敗からこそ学ぶことができる。

これまでの人生を振り返った時、順風満帆な時よりも、人生が思うようにならなかった時にこそ人生において大切なことを学んだということはないだろうか。

英訳

However , you can't avoid your failures completely.

You can learn from it.

If you retrospect your life , do you think that you learned important things as living a life , not when you worked everything out but when you had difficulty in doing something in your life.

「この和文の部分は～に変えて訳すといいでしょう。」のような和文解釈のアドバイスを頂けると非常に嬉しいです^^

では、よろしくお願いします！

回答No.4

love_pet2 · ベストアンサー

なんか ＃１さんと＃２さんの訳が酷似していますが、これはいいとして

You cannot avoid making a mistake completely, but you can learn a new thing from your mistake.

Thinking of your life, I guess you learned important things when you were in trouble, not when you had no problem.

って感じで僕だったら書きます。

お礼

添削ありがとうございます^^

回答No.3

myrtille54

However, the absolute avoidance of your failures is impossible.

The failures are your excellent lesson.

I want to ask you whether you didn't learn more important things when the matters go bad rather than good, looking back your life until now.

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添削ありがとうございます^^

回答No.2

noname#183197

However, you cannot always be perfect; sometimes you fail. You can learn from it. When you look back on your life, You will recall that you have learned important things from your failure not from when everything was going on smoothly.

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回答No.1

mabomk

済みません、時間の関係でコメント無しです、、、下記より察して下さい。

However, you can’t be always perfect, sometimes you fail. And you can learn from it. When you look back at your life, you will recall that you learned much more important things from your failure not from your time everything was going on smoothly.

お礼

添削ありがとうございます^^