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英訳をお願いしますm(__)mとても大切な人に送るメールです。
思っていることを100%きちんと伝えたいので、みなさんの力を貸してください。
とても長い文章ですが、よろしくお願いします。

昨日は久しぶりに会えてうれしかった。元気な姿を見れて安心した。バイバイも言わないで帰ってごめんね。
あなたと一緒にいる時、私はとても幸せだった。でもそれは、いつも100%じゃない。幸せだけど苦しいの。だってあなたには彼女がいるから。昨日あなたと踊ってる時、とても悲しくなった。
２回目あなたに会った時、あなたを好きになった。だけど○○があなたに彼女がいることを教えてくれた。３回目あなたに会った時、あなたを無視したかった。でも自分の気持ちをとめられなくてkissしたの。
ずっと一緒にいたい。だから知ってることを秘密にしてたの。でも、もう終わりにしよう。ベッドの下のハイヒールを見つけるのはもういや(笑)あなたのおかげで我慢強くなったよ(笑)でも、もう我慢できない。英語を話せない私が悪いって分かってる。こんな私と一緒にいてくれてありがとう。とても楽しかった。本当に感謝してる。今でも大好きです。ありがとう。

とても長いですが、これが彼との最後の会話になります。
みなさんよろしくお願いします。

回答No.3

yumetanosi

追記
何回目にあった時は

The second time I met you, I came to like you.
The third time...と言ってもいいですよ

回答No.2

yumetanosi

まず最初に言い回しを挙げます

●久しぶりに～する
　間違いやすい言い方に　
　I played tennis after a long time.　と、よく間違えます。
　I played tennis for the first time in a long time.と言います
　または　after a long absence または　I have(had)not seen for a
　a long time と言います

●元気な姿
　look in good shape （健康的も含めて）
　doing well (順調にやっている）

●苦しい
　painful, have a pain, fell out of place(居場所がない）

●無視する
　文字通りは ignore, 突き放す　give one a brush off,
turn down 拒否する

●終わりにする
　bring to an end, finish, put a period

●我慢できない
　can't put up with it, can't stand it, fed up with it(嫌気が差している）強い嫌悪感を表す

あなたの心情は１００％文面からは読み取れませんので、参考までに書いてみます。あなたの言葉に直してください

Can you imagine how happy I was yesterday? I've met you after such a long absence. What a relief it was to see you in good shape. Sorry I had to leave without saying goodbye to you.
I really was happy when I was with you. But I haven't always felt 100% satisfied. It was a happy time but my heart was painful. You now have a girlfriend. I felt so sad while I was dancing with you yesterday. I came to like you for the second time I met you. But ○○ told me you have a girlfriend.
When I saw you for the third time I was going to turn you down.
But I let my heart go and kissed you.
I want to be with you for good, so I have kept everything I know about you in me. But it's about time we brought an end to our love. I don't like to find high-heels under the bed(laughs)
and I became patient thanks to you(laughs). But now I can't
stand it any longer. I know I should have learned more English. I regret I didn't try harder. It has been very nice of you to go out with me up till now. I enjoyed being with you very much. I really thank you and I still love you.
Many many thanks.

回答No.1

phang

Yesterday,I was glad to meet you after a long time.
I was relieved to see your staying well.
Sorry for my going back without saying goodbye.
I was always very happy when I'm staying with you.
But it's not a perfect happiness.it contains some pain.
Because you've already have the Love.
I got sorrow while dancing with you yesterday.
I falled in love at the time I'd met you second.
But ○○ tell me your having a hunny.
the third time,I want to ignore you.
but I loss a control on my own,and I kissed you.
I hope being with you all along.So I'd kept it secret that I know.
But let me end.
I'm bored to find high heels under the bed.
I became a patient thanks to you.
but I can't stand any more.
I understand that it's bad that I can't speak English.
Thank you for being with me.I had so good times.Thank you so much.
I love you still now.Thanks.

当方高校生です。