初めてホームスティ先に送る手紙なのですが…添削お願いできますか？その３
Question：301179からの続きです。
長くなって ほんとうにすみません。よろしくお願いします。
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Dear XXXXX
This is the first time for me to send e-mail in English.
I received LOI(Letter of Invitation) from IIP yesterday.
Thank you for your LOI(Letter of Invitation).
I am very happy to visit to your school.
From now on, a visit is pleasure.
I've got some questions for you.
1. Lession
Although I wants to prepare a lesson, is there any request?
(It prepares, if possible also except the following.)
ORIGAMI,AYATORI,KAMI-SHIBAI(A folktale of Japan)
Paper balloon,A custom of Japan etc…
2.Climate in August
It is winter in August.
Is it so cold that a coat or muffler is required?
3.the monthly amount of AUS$280(AUS$70 in my case weekly)
Should it pay, after meeting?(Is bank transfer required?)
4.Since it is a good opportunity, I think that I wants to carry
out sightseeing to BLUE MOUNTAINS after training(ZZZ).
This is the first time that it goes to a mountain.
What preparation is required?
Is this period hotel crowded?
Thank you for your time and thank you for reading this letter.
Though I am not good at English, I will try to write as well as
possible.
Since I do not have English skills, I may have some mistakes. When you
notice, please tell me.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Respectfully yours
YYY
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まとめようとしているのに 長くなってしまって 見づらくてすみません…
(ううっ 徹夜状態…)
よろしくお願いします。
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