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質問

I am a second grade student of a junior high school. If you　find any mistakes, please let me know.

Today was English final exam.
The last time exam is the average points 50, I was points 30.
My close friend when midterm exam is It was good point.
So goes good class.
I was left behind. I know I can't keep going this way I study English hard.
I expectation is 60 point, first of all I want to take a point that is higher than the average score. The next test, I want to higher scores.

今日は期末試験で英語がありました。
前回は平均点が50点で僕は35点でした。
僕と仲の良い男子は中間試験が良くて出来る組に行ってしまいました。
僕は一人残されてしまいました。そこでこのままではいけないと思って英語に力を入れました。
僕の予想では今回は60点です。取り敢えず平均点より上をだし、次の試験ではそれ以上を目指したいと思っています。

回答No.1

ohioan4506 · ベストアンサー

こんにちは。中２なんですね。英文を頑張って作っていますね。

>The last time exam is the average points 50, I was points 30.

Last time we had a midterm exam, and the average score was 50 and mine was 35.

>My close friend when midterm exam is It was good point. So goes good class.

At that time, my close friend got a good score and was one of the good students.

>I know I can't keep going this way I study English hard.

I knew I had to do something, and I studied hard.

>I expectation is 60 point, first of all I want to take a point that is higher than the average score. The next test, I want to higher scores.

My expectation of the final exam score is 60, and I hope my score is higher than the average. The next exam, I want much higher score.