添削して欲しいです Part1

質問

「A college degree give me high quality education and the ability that way of thinking. A university is the place where to be able to gain knowledge. At that time, I think that the means to go to college or school is to get this ability. However, in the future, we may forget we learned in college. After graduate the college, we also have to continue to learn and think something to work and live. We can acquire the ability in the college for that. It seems that it is very important to live. 」

日本語やく
「College degreeは質の高い教育と考える力を与えてくれる。大学は知識を得る場所である。それと同時に、大学や学校に行くことの意味はこの能力を手に入れることだと思う。卒業後も、働いて生きていくためには学んだり考え続けなければならない。そういった能力を大学では得られる。生きて行く上でそれはとても重要なことのように思える。」

こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。
よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

SPS700 · ベストアンサー

A college degree would give me high quality education and the ability to think. A university is a place where one can gain knowledge. At the same time, I think that the means to go to college or school is to get this ability. However, in the future, we may forget what we learned in college. After graduating from college, we also have to continue to learn and think something to work and live. We can acquire the ability in the college for that. It seems that it is very important to live.

（日本語にない部分も英文にはあるようですが、まあひとまず）

お礼

ありがとうございます。お礼が遅くなってしまいすみません。大変参考になりました。