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英文の添削をお願いします。よろしくお願いします。

Unfortunately,I was robbed of my pleasure recently. I had my favorite view that was precious thing to me. The view is the sea that was able to see from the road in front of my house. I arrived at my house while always seeing the sea in the front. But a new house is built there pretty soon. I'm sure they will be enjoy the view every day and I'll be worry about scenery disappear little by little. 残念なことに私の楽しみが奪われました。私には大切な景色があります。その景色は私の家の前の道から見える海です。私はいつも正面に海を見ながら家に辿り着きます。しかし、まもなくそこには家が建ちます。きっと彼らはその景色を毎日楽しむ事でしょう、そして私は少しずつ消えていく風景に悩まされるでしょう。

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高校三年の英語で、夏休みの予定についてです。 I'm thinking of visiting my grandmother in Yokohama this summer vacation. She is fond of taking pictures. So I want to take her to the place of the scenery. I'm sure that she will be glad to see the scenery. 私はこの夏休みに、横浜のおばあちゃんのところへ行こうと考えています。彼女は写真を撮ることが大好きです。だから、彼女を景色の綺麗なところへ連れて行ってあげたいです。彼女はきっとその景色を見て、喜ぶと思います。この英文で下の日本語のような意味は伝わるでしょうか？また、文法や時制などの間違いがありましたらご指摘お願いします。こんな文を付け足した方がいい！というのもあれば教えてください。

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英文添削をお願いします！ 1,どこが笑うとこなのか、わからなかったー！ I could not see where THE funny part was. 2,彼は気分屋だから、皆が悩まされている。 He is so moody that it annoys people around him. 3,私のしている仕事は融通が利く方だと思う。（出勤日、時間）I think that my workplace is kind of flexible.

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英文添削お願いします。 October 16th ‘10 I was busy today. As soon as I got up morning, I went to do rice-cake making. As a mallet of today was bigger than I had used ones of past, my arm パンパンになった。 And it was fine, I was tired a lot. After rice-cake making, I had to put a TV board together. But I had just bought some parts for that. When I got a call from the shop buying the TV, I was not easy a little. But I had a promise with my friends to go out to drink, I gave up it and did it. We met in grilled meet restaurant. We bought a 50percent off ticket of this restaurant with an internet. It was great and we would be full. As the TV will come to my house yester morning, I had better go to sleep early. It is almost 2 o’clock.

英文日記を添削していただけますか(^^)　　　

英文日記を書きました。初心者なので、特に文法的な間違いや、表現のおかしい部分などがあれば、直していただけると助かります(^^) 　一応、最後に私の表現したい内容を日本語で表記しておきます。 Wednesday, March 1st. 2006 Rainy Hello, my dearest Candy. I have been thinking of my new house all day long lately. The house designer came to here today, and we discussed the plan of it for a long time. I am excited at the thought of our new house. Candy, you can see that, can you? I really hope that our new house will be built ideally. If the plan will be decided, I will show you it first, Candy. You are looking forward to seeing it, aren’t you? Well, sorry but I have to go now. See you soon. My dearest Candy. (日本語）こんにちは、キャンディー。わたし最近いつも新しい家のことばかり考えているのよ。設計士が今日うちに来て、私たちは長い時間、家のプランを話し合ったの。新しいうちのこと考えたらわくわくするわ。この気持ち分かるでしょう、キャンディー？新しい家が私の思い描くとおりに出来上がることを心から願っているのよ。プランが出来上がったら真っ先に図面を見せてあげるわね。あなたも楽しみでしょう？

英文添削して下さい

５つの文章でストーリーになっています。よろしくお願いします。１．私の友達がスリに遭いそうになったことがあります。 My friend was about to be robbed his purse. ２．何人かで地下鉄に乗ろうと階段を降りていたときのことでした。 It was the time that my friends and I was going down the stairs. ３．私の友達はズボンのポケットに財布をいれていました。 One of my friends’ purse was at his hip pocket. ４．私の友だちによると、ある男がその財布に手を伸ばそうとしていたといいました。 One of them told me that the man was going to reach out his purse. ５．その友達が止めたおかげで、財布を盗まれることはありませんでした。 Because my friend stopped the pickpocketer, my friend was not robbed his purse.

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下記の英文の添削をお願い致します。 When I got up in the morning,I felt srtange atomoshere. I noticed my oclock aram did not go off.I had to go now. but I wanted to have a breakfast.I asked by myself what sholud I do. I made a decition I have a breakfast puickly. If I skip a breakfast,I feel bad and somthing happen during a class. so I think my decition was correct. As a result,I could get to the school on time. Morning class I studied about a fairlytale especially little red riding hood . the fairytale is called AKAZUKINTOOOKAMI in Japan. first,I talked about the import of this story in own country. Among stories is a little different. Second,We listened to another story on youtube I tell you about the story of summary. When The wolf hanged on in forest,he finded one house which a grandmather live.He is hugrry so he tyied to eat her.He came into her house and eat her up!He knew a liitle girl is coming.He waited for her in the house. A littl girl came into the house and met him.She did not realized he is wolf.she said,What great big eyes you have.He replied,All the better to see you with. but she came up with idea he has cool fury so I want the fury. she has guns and shout him.He was dead. She made a fury coat out of wolf slkin. She said,Hell,and do please note my lovely furry coat. I finished made up a story. but I worked with classmate that she ignored to me. I could not stand over again but I can not be helped. I think I am the worst level in this class.I can not speak English very well. Evening class We talked about heart. I think It is difficult to explain heart.It is depend on person. but We couled talk about having heart ot heart. After school I went to the Oxford Circe which is famous for shopping road. I bought some underwear which is Small size and a T-shirts, I was filld up satisfaction. At dinner My host mother told me about a tommorow's dinner. A familly is going to come home at dinner time and have a dinner with us. I feel complax and better at the same time. I can talk person who is diffrent usual but I do not have confedence. I think I lose my confidence tomorrow.

英文を訳を教えてください^^;

英語が苦手なのでまったくわからなくて困っています。・・・ I was moving about with my little mallards in the May green grass in our garden. I was squatting and quacking, "quahg, gegegeg, quahg, gegegeg." I was pleased that my little mallards were following me. Suddenly, I looked up and saw a group of tourists standing at the fence. They started at me in surprise. "Naturally!" I thought. All that they could see was a big man with a beard who was squatting, looking constantly over his shoulder, and even quacking. On the other hand, the little mallards, which could explain my strange behavior, were hidden in the tall grass from the view of the tourists. No wonder the tourists were surprised to see me. in the interest of ～のために move about 動き回る no wonder 無理もない "quahg, gegegeg" マガモの鳴き声

英文の添削をお願いします。

英文の添削をお願いします。私の家の外壁は茶色で、レンガ調のタイル張りです。 The fence of my house is brown in colour, and covered with tiles in mock-brick touch. ○○市のトマトの収穫高は日本一である。 ○○ is the largest tomato producer in Japan.又は、The crop yield of tomato in　○○ -city is highest in Japan. 人の前に立つと緊張する？そういう時は、そこにいる人の顔がジャガイモと思えばいいんだよ！ Do you get nervous when you face others? In that case, think a potato for the face in front of you. 宜しくお願いします。

添削お願いします。

教えていただけると助かります。よろしくお願いします。ここに来れたことは、私の”英語の勉強して良かったと思うことベスト3”に入ります。 One of the top 3 happiest things that was brought to me through my study of English is able to come here. 旅から帰って、普段の生活に戻るのにもうしばらく時間がかかりそう。私の頭の中はアメリカの旅で一杯です。 I returned home. It may take a little more time to get myself a routine. My mind is just filled up with my travel in America. インドのバンガロールは日本でいうところの軽井沢みたいな感じ、別荘を持って休暇を過ごす所だと私は思っています。 I think Bangalore, India is a place like Kruizawa of Japan where many people have a second house and stay during vacation. 　　

翻訳お願いします

This is Mr.Kato, the person (who) will be guiding us today. I know a little boy (whose) parents have passed away. She is a good interpreter (who) I believe can help you. That's the restaurant (which/that) just opened six months ago. Yukari got everything (that) she wanted. Nagasaki is a city (which/that) I'd like to visit. That house, the roof of (which) is red, is mine. He is the man with (whom) I talked last night. Beth told me the phone number of the hotel (which/that) she was staying at. This is the very house (that) I wish to live in.

なぜ<>の中の関係詞になるのか教えてください。

なぜこの関係代名詞になるのか理由をお願いしたいです This is Mr.Kato, the person (who) will be guiding us today. I know a little boy (whose) parents have passed away. She is a good interpreter (who) I believe can help you. That's the restaurant (which/that) just opened six months ago. Yukari got everything (that) she wanted. Nagasaki is a city (which/that) I'd like to visit. That house, the roof of (which) is red, is mine. He is the man with (whom) I talked last night. Beth told me the phone number of the hotel (which/that) she was staying at. This is the very house (that) I wish to live in.

至急：翻訳お願いします

This is Mr.Kato, the person who will be guiding us today. I know a little boy whose parents have passed away. She is a good interpreter who I believe can help you. That's the restaurant which just opened six months ago. Yukari got everything that she wanted. Nagasaki is a city which I'd like to visit. That house, the roof of which is red, is mine. He is the man with whom I talked last night. Beth told me the phone number of the hotel which she was staying at. This is the very house that I wish to live in.

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英文を作りました。おかしな所がありましたら教えてください。 I asked a price of cleak. I bouht a catfoods for Mame. Mame ran away as soon as he saw my father. I think that Mame is my best friend. That my study English is a good idea. です。 Mameは飼い猫の名前です。添削よろしくお願いします。

英文添削おねがいします。

自分が今の仕事を選んだ理由を英文で書きました。添削よろしくお願いします。 I was working as a guide helper when I was a university student. I chose the work related with the person with autisms because of that. I was mental disabilities person's guide helper. However, there were person with autisms in that, too. I had gone out to various places with them on the weekend. But there were a lot of people who have taken a turn in the park during a day. And some people went to the same place every time. When I went out with the person, who lives in group home, She said "I don’t know why I am here, and I want to go home.” And she cried. At that time, I was working as a part-time job. Therefore, I did not neatly know their detailed situations. But I doubted that "Is their life good as today?" in many times. Of course, there were a lot of happiness and goodness, too. However, doubted things very strongly impression in me. So I thought that I want to help the individuals diagnosed with autism to be able to spend the full life happier than now. Therefore, I have chosen the current job that was able to be more deeply related with the person with autism.

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自分の好きなものを話す　という授業で、以下のような文章を書いてみましたが自信がありません。ちゃんと意味があっているか確認していただきたいです。私の気に入っているゲームについて話します I will show you my favorite a pc game. 魔女の家　というタイトルです the game title is majo no ie , English name is The witch's house. このゲームは無料でプレイできる謎解きホラーです The Witch's House is a freeware puzzle oriented horror game by あらすじを話すと、 I tell you about story. The girl visits a mysterious house in the woods. 少女が森の中の怪しげな家に訪れます。 Her name is viola . 彼女の名前はヴィオラ。 She soon discovers its dangerous nature and must find a way out. 彼女はすぐにその家が危険であることを知って、出口を見つけなければなりません。 But the house is ever-changing, and the witch make an attempt on her life. しかしその家は絶えず構造が変化し、そして彼女を殺そうとします It is the purpose of this game to escape from this dangerous house. この危険な家から脱出することがこのゲームの目的です。このゲームの最初の結末は、父親が助けに来てくれます Father comes to rescue of the first ending of this game 彼が、彼女を追いかけてきた魔女を倒してくれます。 He defeats the witch who ran after her. プレイヤーがハッピーエンドだと思ったのは間違いです It is a mistake that a player have thought this is happy ending 本当は彼が倒した魔女は彼の娘、つまりヴィオラだったのです。 the witch whom he defeated was his daughter that is viola. つまり彼は魔女を助けてしまいました so he has helped the witch 魔女が心を取り替えるために魔法を使ったからです。 Because the witch used the magic to replace mind 本当は悲しい物語です It is an actually sad story 私はこのゲームをした後、とてもびっくりして、そして悲しく思いました。 After having played this game, I was surpraised very much and I felt sad. 私はこのゲームの深いストーリーに感動しました。 I was impressed by the deep story また、この物語には多くの謎が残されています。 And many mysteries were left into this story その謎を考察するのはとても面白かったです。 It is very interesting to consider the mystery 私は絵をかくのが趣味なので、油絵でこのゲームをイメージした絵を描いたほど、このゲームが好きです。 My hobby is painting so I drew the oil painting of the image of this game. ちなみに、文化祭に展示したのがそれです。 The picture which I displayed for a school festival is it. 最近とても暑いですね。もうすぐ夏休みですし、 It is so hot and it is summer vacation soon ホラーゲームで涼しくなってはどうでしょうか Let's cool by playing a horror game 興味が湧いたらぜひプレイしてみてもらいたいです。 I want you to play this game if you were interested. 親切な方がいましたらよろしくお願いします。

英文を翻訳お願いします

In general,　wine is made from grapes. Pass me the salt,please. He will be an Edison. I don't mind eating fast food three times a day. A human being is the only animal that is gifted with speech. He said that necessity is the mother of invention. This is the house where Shakespeare was born. Even if the sun were to rise in the west, I would never change my mind. The rescue worker grabbed the man by the hand. The knowledge of first aid is of great use. He was at a loss as to what to do. Mother went to see the school festival by train.

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添削をお願いします！！！ (1)もうひとつここにいられてよかったと思うことがあります。 One more thing I think it is good to be here about. (2)の文に続けるとしたらコロンとセミコロンどちらがふさわしいですか？ (2)母の手伝いができることです。先日祖父が入院してからいろいろと大変なのです。（「大変」というのがうまく表現できません。） I can help my mother with household chores. Things have been hectic since my grandfather went into hospital the other day. (3)母も「（私が）ここにいてくれてよかった」と言っています。それを聞いてうれしかったです。 She said she was glad to have me around. I was happy to hear that.

英文の添削をお願いします。

英文の添削をよろしくお願いします。１、麻酔薬の注射が痛かった。 I had so painful when I got a injection of the anesthetic. （注射が痛いときは painful ？ sore ？ hurt？）２、○○○の映画の無料チケットを会社から2枚もらったので行こうと思っていたんだけど、その映画はもう終わってしまっていた。残念。 I gave two free tickets for ○○○ from company, so I was going to go to see the movie. But the movie has been over. That's shame! 上映期間が短かったようだ。人気がなかったのかな～？ It seems that movie is only out for a very short time. I wonder that was not popular. ３、姪や甥が赤ちゃんだった頃が懐かしい。あの頃は可愛かったなあ～。 I miss that my niece and nephew were baby. They were SO cute in those days.

英文日記を添削していただけますか(^^)　　　

英文日記を書きました。初心者なので、特に文法的な間違いや、表現のおかしい部分などがあれば、直していただけると助かります(^^) 　一応、最後に私の表現したい内容を日本語で表記しておきます Monday, Feb. 27th, 2006 Sunny 　　Hello, my dearest Candy. I received a mail from my friend this morning, who is my alumna at university. I haven’t seen her for a long time so I was very grad to look at this mail. 　　She said ( wrote ? ) that she wanted to meet me because she was coming to near my house next Thursday. Now she lives a long way from my house. Actually I already have something to do for next Thursday, but I will change my schedule and meet her. I’m looking forward to seeing her. Candy, you think so, don't you? See you soon, my dearest Candy. (日本語）今朝、大学時代の友達からメールが来たの。しばらく会ってないからこのメールを見てとてもうれしかったわ。彼女が来週の木曜日にうちの近くに来るので私に会いたいって言うんだけど。実はすでに予定があるのだけど、予定を変えて彼女に会うつもり。彼女に会うのすごく楽しみ。キャンディーもそう思うでしょ？

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