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Strange Morning Atmosphere: Skipping Breakfast and Studying Fairytales

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  • When I woke up, I felt a strange atmosphere. My alarm didn't go off, so I had to hurry. However, I also wanted to have breakfast. I decided to have a quick breakfast because skipping it makes me feel bad and affects my performance in class. As a result, I was able to make it to school on time.
  • During my morning class, we studied a fairytale, particularly 'Little Red Riding Hood.' In Japan, it is called 'Akazukintookami.' I talked about its importance in our country and we also listened to another version on YouTube.
  • In the evening class, we had a discussion about the concept of 'heart.' It was a bit challenging to explain, as it varies from person to person. However, we were able to have a heart-to-heart conversation about it. After school, I went shopping on Oxford Circle, a famous shopping road. I bought some small-sized underwear and a t-shirt, which made me very satisfied. At dinner, my host mother informed me that a family would be joining us. I feel a mix of nervousness and excitement, as I will get the chance to talk to someone different from my usual circle.

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スペルの間違いが多数あります。 過去形などの変化も(スペルと言うより変化した単語そのものが)間違いが多いです。 breakfast,lunch,dinner は 形容詞と伴わないときは 冠詞は付けなくていいです。 I asked myself、 by は不要です。 2段落目は何を言おうとしているのはわかりにくいです。(和文がないため) 単語のスペルと変化については辞書で確認することにして、和文も付けて、2,3回に分けて 添削希望を出されることをオススメします。 長い、スペルミス多数、和文がない、の点で見当を付けながら読み進むのが困難に感じてしまうので・・・ 失礼、ごめんなさい。

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