英文についての質問
似たような質問が続きすみません。
What did Edmund Burke say is the problem with the state?という質問に対し、
He said the problem of the state is that all states trying to control human violence must be run by members of the same violence species.
という回答をしようと思うのですが、こちらの英文の添削をして欲しいです。
下記の内容から少し文章を変えて英文を作りました。
Whether or not we accept the legitimacy of states as at least a theoretical possibility, we all are concerned with controlling the violence of the state. Edmund Burke was pessimistic about the possibility, given that all states intended to control the violence of humans must be run by members of that same violent species. The state itself, he argued, was the problem.
よろしくお願いします。
