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My heroine is Lauryn Hill. She was born to the middle-class family of New Jersey in the United States. When she was young, she sang from in the choir of a church, and she was appearing on TV. She became a singer 1994.
I knew about her with the magazine. I liked the music "CAN'T TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU" then. However, words or a singer were not known at all. Therefore, a lot was investigated about the music with the magazine. Then, I got to know that the music was sung by many singers. I listened to the music various persons' "CAN'T TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU." Also in it, it was Lauryn Hill's music that I liked.
First ,I was surprised by the Lauryn Hill's voice. Her voice is because it was forcibly gentle. I did not know the words of the music. However, the contents of words have been transmitted. As for me, that time heard Western music for the first time. I thought that a feeling was transmitted, even if I was language different.
Next ,I was impressed by the words of the song. Because, the words were very dear. It had written "it is great" , "it loving" and, "I having been lonely" , etc. Never, I am shameful and can say such a thing.
Finally, I like her view. She is a black woman. However, she does not lose discrimination but continued singing her song. And many prizes were won. She is positive, gentle and gentle for herself. She is doing fund-raising activities with her own CD. Probably, many children were saved by the fund- raising. I like her very much. And I want to become a great adult like her.
補足
ありがとうございます。 musicは、なぜ「歌詞」という意味になるのでしょうか？ また、なぜ、lyricsを使わずに、musicを使っているのでしょうか？