英作文ができない。
英語の簡単な文章を書いてみたんですが、ちゃんとかけているのかどうか、よくわかりません。文法が間違っていないかどうか、文章の流れが不自然でないかどうか見ていただきたいのです。
よろしくお願いいたします。
I’m Masato Oda. I was born on March 29, 1987 in Nara, so I’m now 20 years and two months old.
I’m a junior at the School of Literature, Jonan University. I major in Education. I’m taking 23 courses this semester. I’d like to be a teacher at a junior high school or a high school. So, I must be a good speaker of English.
I live at home with my parents, brother, sister, and grandmother. Our house is located in the southeast of Nara, and I come to college by bicycle. It takes me about an hour and ten minutes from my home to the college.
My hobbies are cycling, reading and seeing movies. I do cycling for exercise and I come to college from my house. I’m reading a paperback pocket edition well recently. I'm busy recently, so I don't see any movies at a movie theater, but I want to see it there.
お礼
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