Momoe's Growth and Changing Emotions: A Reflection
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If Momoe really wants to show growth, she should consider helping or apologizing to the driver.
Despite being in a rush, Momoe could have made an effort to ride the motorcycle while apologizing.
While it is clear that meeting Himiko has brought about some changes in Momoe, it seems that her emotions and responses towards those who she is not interested in remain the same.
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If Momoe really minds grow, she should try to help or apologize to the driver.
Although she was in a hurry, I thought she was able to riding a motorcycle while saying "I am sorry".
It certainly seems that to met Himiko led change for Momoe.
However, I felt that she was not change the emotions and responses for those who are not interested.
もしモモコが本当に成長したのなら、彼女は運転手を助けようとしたり謝ったりするはずだ。いくら急いでいるとはいえ、「ごめんなさい」と言いながらバイクに乗り走り去ることくらいできたと思う。
確かにモモコはイチゴと出会って変わったと思う。
しかし、彼女が興味のない他者に対しての感情、対応は変わっていないと思った。
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よろしくお願いします。
If Momoko was really mature, she would have tried to help the driver, or have apologized. No matter how much of a hurry she may have been in, she could have said, "I am sorry," as she sped away.
So certainly Momoko has changed after she met Ichigo. But I don't think her feeling and attitude toward others have changed.
日本文では桃子にイチゴとあるので、役の人名もそうしました。
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添削していただきありがとうございます。 名前が英文と違ってしまっていてすみません。 大変参考になりました！ ありがとうございます！！