何度も申し訳ないのですが。自由英作文の添削
何度もすいません。
受験が迫りあせっていて添削を依頼させていただことが多いと思うのですが
もしよろしければ些細な点でも指摘いただけると助かります
テーマ 日本について外国人に何か自由に説明してください(100~150)
There is a lot of great beautiful nature in Japan.
For example, it has Mt.Fuji , which is very famous for its height. It is the highest mountain in Japan, so a lot of foreign tourists come to japan in order to see it. It is also famous for its beauty.
Last summer I went sightseeing in Yamanasi. When I took a look at Mt.Fuji, I was overwhelmed by its beuauty. Probably you may not be able to understamd how great it was, so I recommend that you see it. In addition, you can climb it. If you have conffidence in your physical strength, you should have a try. It is said the view from the top is beyond description.
お礼
分かりやすかったです。感謝します。