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質問

(1)新作「SK」が２５年ぶりに、放送されることになりました。

　　For the first time in 25 years, updated 「SK」 is to be aired.

(2)新シリーズは、5月からインドで、年内には、日本でも放送されます。

The new series will be broadcasted in India from May, and perhaps in Japan within the year ,too.

➂アジアの中でもインドでビジネスの突破口を開こうという試みがみられます

I find that an attempt to open a breakthrough in business in India, even in Asia.

(4)今まで一度も見たことがないので、時間があれば、春休み中に一話を見てみようかなと思います。

I never wacth it. So, if I am free, I will think to wacth episode 1 during spring vacation.

(5)絶対に、そんな暇はないと思うけど。

Absolutoly, I don't have liesure.

回答No.1

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(1) A new version of "SK" will be aired for the first time in 25 years.

(2) The new series will be aired in India beginning in May and in Japan as well by the end of the year.

(3) An attempt to make a breakthrough in business in Asia, especially in India, can be seen.

(4) As I have never seen the series, I think I will try watching its episode 1 during the spring vacation if I have time to spare.

(5) However, I am afraid I will never find such time to spare.

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