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I am a second grade student of a junior high school. If you　find any mistakes, please let me know.
It is yesterday.
It came home at 5:00PM.
My mother said "You are too late. final exam　midterm exam　soon."
I said "today's variously at the school."
But my older sister who heard the talk " That was not you though played cards by three people with the child who looked like you well in the park. "
I said "What story? " But It was doubted by two people, and it finally confessed.
It was actually invited by the friend and it played cards as a pastime in the park.
The father listened to speak, "You had many times before now."
"But first"
"I would not like that.'ll Be doing dozens of times already"
"Dozens of times and say, I know it is doing pretty much did not do it"
"It will in such a thing. When I was a slow school would always playing in the park" is told with chrysanthemum Innovation. I do the three work together to play. The opposition is batting out strong.

昨日の事です。
午後５時に帰宅しました。
母が「随分遅かったね。期末試験が近いのに」と言ったので「今日は学校で色々とあったんだよ」というと、その話を聞いていた姉が「お前によく似た子が三人で公園でトランプをしていたけど、あれはお前じゃなかったの」といいました。
「えっ。何の話？」と僕はいいましたが、二人に怪しまれ、ついに白状しました。
実は友達に誘われて公園でトランプをして遊んでいたのです。
父がその話しをきいて「お前、今までに何回あった」
「初めてだけど」
「そんな事ないだろう。もう何十回もやっているだろう」
「何十回というと、かなりやっているみたいだけど、あまりやっていないよ」
「そんな事内だろう。いつも学校が遅いときは公園で遊んでいたんだろう」といわれギクっとしました。三人の連係プレーにやれてしまいました。うちの野党は強力打線です。

姉というのは　big sister elder sister　older sister　と書くようですが
いまいち使い分けが分かりません。それと妹の場合はyounger sisterで良いのでしょうか。　
長女　次女　三女　末っ子は英語でどう書くのしょうか。長女というのは親から見た場合と一番したからみた姉妹からだと異なるのでしょうか。教えて下さい。

回答No.1

mirage1mac · ベストアンサー

It was yesterday. I came home at 5:00pm. My mother said, "You are late. You know you have the final exam soon." I said, "A lot was going on at school today." My big sister overheard this and said, "I saw a boy who looked a lot like you playing cards with two other boys in the park. Wasn't that you?." I said, "What are you talking about?" Pressed by my mother and my sister, I finally cracked. I was in fact playing cards with my friends in the park. My father overheard us and chimed in. He asked, "How many times have you been fucking around like this before?" "It was the first time," I replied. "I don't believe you. You've been doing this dozens of times, haven't you?" said my father. I said, "Not that many." My father went on and said, "I don't think so. You were playing in the park every time you were late from school, weren't you?" I flinched at the remark. I was outmatched by the team play. My family is a team of skilled interrogators.

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