英文添削をお願いします。
英文添削をお願いします。
29th September ‘10
Today, I worked in a relax mood, because my boss took a day off today.
After working, I went out to drink with my friend of junior high school days.
He is my best friend, so I could enjoy from the bottom of my heart.
Especially when I lost my confidence now, this drink made me smooth over my hut feelings.
I remembered that someone said , ‘If you drink, you should drink old alcohol. If you read a book, you should read old book. If you talk, you should talk with old friend.’
I thought I had a good day today.
補足
I played tennis in Karuizawa with my family.とI played tennis with my familyin Karuizawa.正しい語順はどちらですか？