英文日記を添削していただけますか(^^)
英文日記を書きました。初心者なので、特に文法的な間違いや、表現のおかしい部分などがあれば、直していただけると助かります(^^) 3日分ありますので、簡単な添削で結構です。
Sunday March 13, 2006 It started snowy, but it was sunny later.
My son, who will be 3 years old this April, tease me to read many picture books lately. He brought about 10 books to me before sleeping on his usual way tonight, so I had to read them for him. It was tough to read all of them at night, buy I think it is important to develop his mind. I will do my best for him.
Tuesday, March 14, 2006 It was cloudy today.
I had my hair dye and cut today. Although my son noticed my change, yet my husband didn’t notice it at all. （noticeが2回目なので違う表現がしたいのですが．．．）I wondered if once a man married a woman, he lose interest to his wife!
Wednesday, March 15, 2006 We had fine weather today.
I went out having lunch with my friends of three. （友達は友達でも、「ママとも」と表現したいのですが．．．）We drank two glasses of wine and ate spaghetti. They were very delicious and we chatted for a long time drinking wine. I spent pleasant time so I felt my stress of daily chores went off.
