英文で間違っているところを教えてください。
高一です。
プレゼンテーションのための英作文をしたのですが、「どこが間違っているのか」、「どこの表現がおかしいのか」が分からないので教えてください。
大筋「AとBの会話で、学校内の人気なことで有名な少年の噂について話している状況」
*日本語訳をすべて書くと長くなるので、心配なところだけ書きます。
A Hey, B.
A I have a question to ask you.
B Hello,what is that?
A I heard about a popular and famous boy in this school from my friend.
（私は友達から、この学校の人気なことで有名な少年について聞いた）
B Who is he?
A I also don't know him.
B Does he have anything features?
A I heard that he is a very smart.
B There are many smart students in this school.
B That alone does not make it clear.
A He likes soccer for a long time. And he is good at playing soccer.
B ウーン. What are there anything else?
A I hear that he likes math and studies it all the time. You don't find him not studying math.
B Really? Is he studying math, except when math is taught?
A Yes.
A And there is another one.
A He has a girlfriend.
B I see.
B He is so popular.
A Oh, I remember.
A He fractured when he played soccer.
B Oh! I feel that I have seen him.
B I have forgot his name.
「ここで（A）がポケットから写真を落とす」
B What is this?
A I had forgot that I have a picture.
B Please show me.
「ここで（B）が写真を見る」
B I know him. He is there!
以上です。
文法的に間違っているところ、直した方がいい表現があったら教えてください。
お礼
ありがとうございます。おかげでスッキリして勉強に集中できます。