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The wonderfulness of everyday life will be exhilarated with heartwarming by a number of children's naughty behavior.
子どもたちのわんぱくな言動の数々によって、平和な日常の素晴らしさが淡々とほのぼのと醸し出されていく。

The movie is a new residential area near Tokyo. Similar single-storied house build and the camera captures the view in which the banks can been seen ahead of the middle street in an overhead view.
映画は東京近郊の新興住宅地。平屋建ての同じような家屋が建ち並び、真ん中の通りを彼方に土手が見える景色を俯瞰でカメラがとらえる。

The story develops from the children's words that the conversation such as the greeting that adults exchanges is useless.
大人たちが交わす挨拶などの会話を無駄だという子供たちの言葉から物語は展開していく。

I think that it depicted the poor life of lower-class samurai at that time with through realism, until the darkness of the lights in the room, the director expressed the background of that era perfectly.
部屋の灯りの暗さまで、徹底したリアリズムで幕末の下級武士の窮乏生活を描き切り、その時代の背景を完璧に表現していましたと思う。

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cbm51901 · ベストアンサー

The [beauty] of everyday life [is portrayed with warmth] [through] a number of children's naughty behavior.
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=portray

The movie is [located in] a new residential area [in the suburbs of] Tokyo (Edo?). Single-storied house[s] [that look the same] [are built next to one another,] and the camera captures [a panoramic] view [of the landscape] in which [a riverbank] is seen [far] ahead of the [main] street.
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=located+in
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=in+the+suburbs+of

The story starts with children's [saying] that [adults'] conversations, such as the greeting[s] [they] exchange, [are a waste of time.]

I [felt that the movie] depicted with thorough realism, the [impoverished] life of lower-class samurais [in the last days of Edo periiod]. [For example, the director [re-creates the dark lighting] in the room, [which was typical] of that era.
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=impoverished
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=re-create
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=typical+of

お礼

回答ありがとうございます。
１、２、３は同じことについて書いているのですが４だけ江戸の話でまた別なんです＞＜
（Edo?）とわざわざ書いていただきありがとうございます。
大変参考になりました！ありがとうございます