【至急】日→英のご添削

質問

彼は約13年マーケティング業務の経験があります。また、英語スキルは弱いですがビジネス英語を勉強中です。
He has experience in marketing for about thirteen years. Alro, His English ability is lacking but he has been studying English.

回答No.2

momomo_338 · ベストアンサー

He's been working at the marketing business segment.
To be honest his English skill is still not good but he's currently studying business English to improve it.

努力の部分を強調するんでちょっと自分の言葉入れちゃってます。
To be honest 実を言うと・・・　認めざるを得ないんですが・・・
to improve it. 向上するために。

回答No.1

SPS700

He has about thirteen years' experience in marketing。Though his ability to use the English language is limited, he is currently brushing it up. とも