英文添削お願いします。
英文添削お願いします。
On October Second ‘10
I had a holiday and went to car dealer.
First, I went to Toyota to see Estima.
As soon as I went there, I did test-drive one.
It was comfortable, but it wasn’t more comfortable Alfard and Velfire.
When all of salesman find I decided to buy a car, they surve me with the greatest survice.
After Toyota, I went to Honda.
But there was not a car I wanted.
When I was about to leave the shop, the salesman tried to prevent me from leaving there by this way and that.
When I was feeling an awkward situation, my mobile phone rang at a good timing.
It called from Toyota and told me to leave my bag.
I left there at once and came back Toyota to receive it.
As soon as I arrived at there, the salesman brought my bag to me.
I felt I was lucky, as I left the shop.
If I left it another place, it wouldn’t come back me.
お礼
ありがとうございました！！