The population of Japan is becoming increasingly old. What do you think should
Now I'm working on this problem, " The population of Japan is becoming increasingly old. What do you think should be done to support the elderly population of Japan ( around 140 words )
I tought of a flow of my plot about this essay.
話の流れとしては ( this is a flow of my plot...)
日本では高齢化の問題が深刻化している
2つの理由から支援すべきだ
この問題を解決するには、"介護サービス"の充実を図ることが大切
介護を自ら進んでおこなおうとする人が不足している
介護をするひとの給料が十分ではない
医療費をさげるべきだ
医療費が高くなり、病院に行きたくても、行けない人が増えている。
平和で、安全な社会を作るためにも、介護サービスの充実はどうしても
必要
Frist paragraph
In Japan the problem of becoming older is getting seriouse these days and there are a lot of elderly people in Japan.I think we should try to solve this problem quickly for two reasons.
second para
One thing for it is that nursing service is not enough for elderly people.It is because there are very few who is willing to take care of them. For people who have to take care of them , their salary is not enough to be paied by government . Therefore , government should support them by inproving nersing service.
thrid para
for another reason, to support them more, government should support them by lowing medical costs. Medical costs are getting higher and higher today and a lot of people can't go easily to see the doctors in hospitals.
For unemployees , the problem of medical costs is a very big problem.
last para
I think goverment should low medical costs and they should support their
life to live safely and healthly.
To answers ,I would like all of you to answer this problem in English.
I hope you could help me . Thank you so much !!
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