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遠距離の彼とケンカして、メールの返信もなく、もう１ヶ月になります。
私が短期留学中で、彼にわがままを言ってしまい、彼を失望させてしまいました。
ですが用意していた写真と、あとはストレスを与えてしまったことを謝りたくて、
手紙を送りたく、どうか英語を教えてください。

○○さん、

元気で過ごしていますか。
８月の始めに送るはずだった写真を送ります。

How have you been？
I send you the pics that intended to send you on the August.

６月にアメリカへ来てからずっと、毎日勉強しない日はなかったよ。
実は叔母は病気で、最後の海外旅行と言っていました。
私たちを育ててくれた叔母を無視できずに観光に付き添いました。

I had been studied since I came in US on June.
Actually my aunt is sick and she said that her overseas travels will be last time.
So I couldn’t ignore such as situation. Because she had been always helped us.

ここでの貴重な時間を、いつもひとりで過ごしています。
知らずにストレスがあって、それであなたに甘えた事は本当にごめんなさい。
学校が終わってから、図書館へ直行し、最終バスで家へ帰る毎日。
日曜日は礼拝が終わってから、図書館へ行っています。

I always spent by my own in here and I am really sorry about I was rely on you.
Usually I go to liberally at university after school directly
and go back to home by last bus.
On Sunday, I go to liberally after church.

9/11にはここで英語の試験を受けました。次の試験は１０月です。
本気で勉強して、高い点をとり、本当はあなたを驚かせたかった。
でも、電話でわがまま言ったことはごめんなさい。
私はどこまで愚かなのかな。。

I took the test in here on 11 September and will take it on October too.
Actually, I just wanted to surprise you I got high score by the end of this year.
But I am really sorry about my selfish.
I wanted to apologize about my fault.
How stupid am I supposed to be?

神様は私を導いてくださり、とても順調に生活しています。
God is always guiding me(every morning QT),and things are going well, I think.

Well,hope you are doing well.
I'm very worried about you.
Take care of yourself.

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sayshe · ベストアンサー

How have you been?
I will send you the pictures that I intended to send you early in August.
I have been studying since I came to the US in June.
Actually my aunt is sick and she said that it would be the last time for her to travel overseas.
I couldn't ignore her in such a situation and I accompanied her when she did the sights because she had brought us up.
I always spend my precious time here alone.
I am really sorry that I completely depended on you.
I guess there was some kind of stress though I did not notice it.
I usually go directly to the library at my university after the last class and come back home on the last bus.
On Sundays I go to the library after I attend a church service.
I took an English examination here on September 11.
I will take another one in October.
Actually I wanted to surprise you by getting high scores at the end of this year.
I apologize to you for being selfish when we talked over the phone last time.
How stupid I am!
Thank goodness, I think everything is going smoothly recently.

I hope you are doing well,too.
Take good care of yourself.

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