石川県のプレゼンについて 英語

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石川県についてのプレゼンテーション 英語

短期留学で石川県の金沢についてプレゼンをします。
プレゼンは３人で行います。
最初に石川県の旅行についてのスケジュール表を配りプレゼンをします。

以下の英文を見て、わかりづらい所やもう少し簡単な英文で
説明できる所があればアドバイスお願いします！

金沢駅について
Did you understand it a little about Kanazawa?

Kanazawa Station is the start of the tour

There was built in 1898

It is the most famous station in Ishikawa.

About 20,000 people use it in a day

The Hokuriku Shinkansen is going to be built in 2014. And it is going to link Kanazawa from Tokyo in 2 hours 20 minutes

It is the Shinkansen which links Osaka to Tokyo.
兼六園
Kenrokuen is one of three Japanese famous gardens

There is the place that is the most beautiful in 3.

There has beautiful scenery in the four season. I can look at the many expressions every season.

In the garden, there is a certain oldest fountain in Japan

Admission is adult 3 dollars child is 1 dollar
雪吊り
Yukiduri means that I keep a branch by a rope so that snow does not turn the branch of the tree in the winter season.

It is attach for from November to the middle of December and removes it in the middle of March.

Five gardeners of Kenrokuen and the supplier include it, too and carry out work with about 590 people.

It will use it again excluding the old one next year.
武家屋敷
Old samurai residences are the residences that the samurai owned.

A left photograph is a samurai residence mark Nomura family.

It became 5th place by the Japanese garden technical journal of the United States.

There are few old samurai residences except the Nomura family.
金箔の鏡
I explain gold leaf. stands mirror.

It is recognized as food additives and can eat, but is very thin.

About 30 minutes and 10 dollars are necessary to make stands mirror.

However, it is one handicraft souvenir in the world

回答No.3

noname#111034 · ベストアンサー

＞留学先の先生に聞いてみよう

文法的なあやまりがないかと，画像と説明文でじゅうぶんに日本の事物が理解できるかについて尋ねてみたほうがいいでしょう。

口頭の場合は関係ないですが，字を訂正しておきます。
by an American journal of Japanese garden planning
American を先に出すために，雑誌名（固有名詞）ではなく一般的な表現に変更しましたので，語頭は小文字です。

＞万が一言う内容を忘れた時の場合に

ときどきメモを見ながら発表してもいいと思います。プロジェクタを使う場合は部屋を暗くしますので，大きな字で書き，かつペンライトもあったほうがいいかもしれません。

お礼

お忙しい中、質問と捕捉に答えてくださりありがとうございました。

passersbyさんのアドバイスを参考にプレゼン頑張ります！！

回答No.2

noname#111034

あなたの英文の意図がわからないところは勝手に解釈して，かつ自己流にアレンジして書いてみました。ご参考に。

兼六園
Kenrokuen garden is one of the three famous gardens in Japan. Among the three, I think Kenrokuen is most beautiful. We enjoy beautiful scenery throughout the year. From season to season, different beauties can be found. At the center of the garden is Kasumigaike fountain. It is the oldest one in Japan. The entrance fee is 3 dollars for an adult, and 1 dollar for a child.

雪吊り
Yukizuri is the way to protect trees from Kanazawa's heavy snow in winter. About 590 workers led by five gardeners of Kenrokuen hang each branch with a rope from the top of the tree. They carry out this task from November to the middle of December. The ropes are removed in the middle of March. The ropes, excluding worn ones, will be used again next year.

武家屋敷
Old samurai residences remain in the town of Kanazawa.
The left photograph shows Nomura family's.
It was ranked as the 5th must-see place by an American Journal of Japanese Garden Planning.
Kanazawa has few old samurai residences except it.

金箔の鏡
Kanazawa is also famous for traditional handicrafts using gold foil. Tourists can experience their work for 10 dollars. In about 30 minutes a mirror stand is completed for the souvenir. At restaurants gold foil is cooked as a food additive, but you can hardly feel it in your mouth because it is very thin.

補足

素早い回答ありがとうございます。自分の文と照らし合わせ留学先の先生に聞いてみようと思います。

あと、万が一言う内容を忘れた時の場合にパワーポイントに簡単な説明文を加えるなど、解決策がありましたら教えて下さい。

回答No.1

Chicago243

時間もあまりないので最初のだけ、、、
後で余裕があれば戻ってきます。

Did you understand it a little about Kanazawa?
->Do you know anything about Kanazawa?
シンプルにこれくらいでいいのかなって気がします。

Kanazawa Station is the start of the tour

ちょっと唐突かなという気もしますね。
->We are going to introduce Kanazawa station first.
As you know, you are going to start the tour from the station.

There was built in 1898. It is the most famous station in Ishikawa.

->The station was built in 1898 and is the most famous station in Ishikawa prefecture.

About 20,000 people use it in a day.
->At present, about 20,000 people use the station in a day.

The Hokuriku Shinkansen is going to be built in 2014. And it is going to link Kanazawa from Tokyo in 2 hours 20 minutes

->Additionally, a new sinkansen line is going to built and go into operation in 2014. It will travel between Kanazawa and Tokyo in only 2 hours 20 minutes.

It is the Shinkansen which links Osaka to Tokyo.
->As you know, a sinkansen is one of the fastest and safest trains all over the world.