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In Pakistan, there are problems that combine Poverty, low levels of education, high fertility rate, etc., that is, there is the problem that symbolizes low-developed countries profile.
In particular, the access to health service for Women such as reproductive health or pregnancy/delivery care still bad and urban rural gap is large entire health sector.
Furthermore, in HDI(0.550, 2015) Pakistan is the 147th out of 188 countries, it is second lowest in Southern Asia countries(from East-South Asia to South-West Asia), only after the Afghanistan(0.479, rank169th)
