提出課題（少々長いです）

質問

お願いします
小説のホールズを使った提出課題があります。以下が課題の説明文です
1. Basic Information (required) Introduce the title and author of the book. Briefly describe the plot and several of the main characters. Be careful to leave out the ending of the story. You don’t want to tell the reader the ending, especially if you are trying to persuade the person to read the book.
2. Highlights (optional) Describe the highlights or your favorite parts of the book and explain why you liked them.

以下が私の文です　※２のハイライトはまだ２つ目を選んでいるところなのでとりあえず一つだけです。　文中の（）は自分の言いたいことです

The title of the novel is "Holes" and the author is Louis Sachar. A boy, whose name is Stanley, he is a central character. This story starts from shoes fall down to Stanley's head. He alleges that he stole baseball player’s shoes but he is innocent.
He is sent to Green lake Camp that place is correction facility, he go there as criminal person.
Since he is very shy and gawky, in the camp, he is always teased from another camper.

Through a certain incident, he had changes a lot. It was another main character Zero's existence. Zero is reticent, no relatives and black. He does not open up to everybody first but only Stanley melt his heart. Later, Zero break out from the institution. Stanley makes up his mind to run after him. they bite the bullet for their adversity and they are headed to "the promised land"

I would like to describe two favorite parts of the narrative.
In chapter 32 of "Holes", by Louis Sachar, Stanley makes up his minds that run after Zero to save him. This scene has another meaning. Not only Stanley would be often teased by bully since he was little child, but also in the camp, some bully pokes fun at him. He always blames Stanley's great-great-grandfather.
Therefore, His breakout is symbolic of break with his past and break the traumatic cycle. This is the most pivotal scene of this book.
At last he is emancipated from the Birdcage called Fate and he chooses freedom instead of being shackle.(彼はやっと運命と言う名の鳥かごから開放され束縛ではなく自由を選んだ)
At the moment that he takes the wheel, he changes his destiny by himself.（ハンドルを握った瞬間、彼は自分で運命を変える） This is my most favorite scene in this story.

※出だしのThe title of the novel is "Holes" and the author is Louis Sachar. ですがもう少し歯切れのいい言い方ってないでしょうか

※小説などの感想を書くときの時制がいまいち分かっていないのですが
以前どこかで「現在で書いたら現在で通す」と聞いたような覚えがあるのですが正しいでしょうか？

よろしくお願いします＜（＿　＿）＞

回答No.1

yasei · ベストアンサー

正しいです。時制を変える必要はないはずです。

課題は大変でしょうが自力でがんばって下さい。

お礼

ありがとうございました！！安心しました
またよろしくお願いします

回答No.3

noname#202629

ANo2です。

＞以前どこかで「現在で書いたら現在で通す」と聞いたような覚えがあるのですが正しいでしょうか？

Business letterの書き方しか習ったことが無いので、なんともいえませんが、参考資料からすると、私の文の過去形は現在形に直したほうが良いのかもしれませんね。

参考URL：

http://www.amazon.co.jp/Holes-Louis-Sachar/dp/0440414806

お礼

ありがとうございました！！
またよろしくお願いします

回答No.2

noname#202629

長いので1stパラグラフまで、参考程度にでもなれば・・

Holes is a novel written by Louis Sachar. A central character is a boy whose name is Stanley. This story starts from shoes falling down on his head. Though Stanley was innocent, he was alleged to have stolen baseball player’s shoes. He was sent to Green lake Camp where this poor boy had to serve time for a criminal person in a correction facility.
Since he was very shy and gawky, in the camp, he was always teased by other campers.