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THE POPULATION OF ARGENTINA
I will tell you about the population of Argentina.
There live 40,301,927(forty million, three hundred one thousand, nine hundred twenty-seven) people in Argentina―about forty million people.
Considering the population of Japan is about one hundred twenty million, that of Argentina is very small.
As you can see, THREE TIMES!!
So the rank of Argentina’s population is the 31st, and that of Japan’s is, to my surprise, the 10th.
However, the population of Argentina is increasing and its population growth rate is 0.938%.
On the other hand, in Japan, as you know, the number of people is decreasing. The rate of Japan is -0.088%.
So in 2050 there will be about 51,382,000 people in Argentina, and about 112,198,000 in Japan.
では、よろしくお願いします。
