自然な会話文になるように、添削をお願いします。
Kevin: Hi. Looks like busy, huh? Texting?
John: Um... Yeah...
K: To whom?
J: ... Nobody...
K: Hey, hey, it wouldn't happen to be her. Don't tell me you started to text her again.
J: ...
K: Answer quick.
J: Well, I'm just wishing there is a way that... I could have another chance...
K: Come on! You just don't understand, do you? If you keep doing this thing, he's gonna show up right in front of you at any minute. What would you do then? Think you can handle it?
J: ... Whatever...
K: John, I know you had your heart broken badly and I feel really sorry about it. But, look, you two are NEVER getting back together and you know it. You have to face it. Just forget about her and live again.
J: Well, that's easy for you to say...
K: I'll tell you what. John, there are millions of girls out there waiting for you, I promise. I think it's about time to go out.
(the cell ringing)
K: It's your date, John.
J: What do you mean, "my date"?
K: I gave Alice your number.
J: You mean you fix me up?
K: No, I mean, she's been interested in you for million years, that's all. You know, she sure is a lot of fun to hang out with. I bet you have a good time. Come on! What are you waiting for? Answer it!
J: Well... Okay, I'll speak to her.
K: Okay! Go for it! John, you are gonna owe me so big for this if you can make it, remember that?
よろしくお願いします。
お礼
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