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質問

子供にやりたいことを好きにやらせる親もいるが、勉強を強いる親もいる

There are parents who make something to give a child do liking, and the parents who force it study are also.

回答No.2

princelilac

好きにやらせる let と
強いる make を使い分けてみます。

Some parents let their children do as they' d like, others make theirs make study.

There are を先頭に使ってもいいです。
関係代名詞を使わない方が、簡潔な言い方になります。

回答No.1

marbleshit

Some parents let their children do whatever they like, while some force them to study.

とも。