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It seems to be a tacit consent that no one can enter. This is this group.
誰も入れない暗黙の了解があるような気がします。それがこのグループなのです。

And in last scene, Tanaka had to killed Sakata who turned into monster to protect the discipline of the corps.
ラストシーンでは、隊の規律を守るために、田中は狂人と化した坂田を斬らなければならなかった。

The point is that Tanaka may cut the cherry blossom with a meaning to truncate the sense of self hate against himself.
つまり田中は自分に対する自己嫌悪の念を切り捨てる、という意味も込めて桜を切ったのかもしれない。

I think that by cutting the cherry blossom, Tanaka rid himself of his mixed feelings towards Sakata and his affection for Kondo.
田中は桜を切ることで、坂田に対しての複雑な感情、同時に近藤への愛情を捨て去ったのではないだろうか。

こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。
よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

cbm51901 · ベストアンサー

[There] seems to be a [silent agreement] [not to let anyone in.] [Such is the peculiarity] of this group.
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=silent+agreement
https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=peculiarity

And in [the] last scene, Tanaka, [in order to maintain] the discipline of the corps, had to [slay] Sakata who turned into [a mad man.]

[It may be that] Tanaka cut the cherry blossom [tree] [in an attempt to eliminate his] sense of [self-disgust.]

I think that by cutting the cherry blossom [tree], Tanaka rid himself of his mixed feelings towards Sakata and his affection for Kondo.

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