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The Second Red Scare was a fear-driven phenomenon brought on by the growing power of communist countries in the wake of the Second World War, particularly the Soviet Union.
Many in the U.S. feared that the Soviet Union and its allies were planning to forcefully spread communism around the globe, overthrowing both democratic and capitalist institutions as it went.
With the Soviet Union occupying much of Eastern and Central Europe, many in the U.S. perceived their fears of communist expansionism as confirmed.
The U.S. also feared that communist agents had infiltrated the federal government.

Second Red Scare（赤狩り）についてまとめた文章なのですが、もう少し簡単にまとめることはできないでしょうか？

（一応自分なりにまとめてみました↓）
⇨The Second Red Scare was a fear-driven phenomenon brought on by the growing power of communist countries in the Soviet Union.
The U.S. feared that the Soviet Union and its allies were planning to forcefully spread communism around the globe, overthrowing both democratic and capitalist institutions as it went.
With the Soviet Union occupying much of Eastern and Central Europe, many in the U.S. feared of communist expansion and invasioned the federal governent.

最後の文章を３つ目の文章にまとめたのですが、いかがでしょうか？

添削、もしくはこのような表現があるよ、もっと簡単にできるよ、などあれば教えて欲しいです。

よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

Nakay702 · ベストアンサー

「赤狩り」の背景的知識に乏しいので、不十分ながら、以下のとおりお答えします。

＞The Second Red Scare was a fear-driven phenomenon brought on by the growing power of communist countries in the Soviet Union.
⇒完璧だと思いますが、「おもにソ連で」と加えてもいいでしょうね。
→The Second Red Scare was a fear-driven phenomenon brought on by the growing power of communist countries mainly in the Soviet Union.

＞The U.S. feared that the Soviet Union and its allies were planning to forcefully spread communism around the globe, overthrowing both democratic and capitalist institutions as it went.
⇒both やas it wentを削ぎ落としましょうか。
→The U.S. feared that the Soviet Union and its allies were planning to forcefully spread communism around the globe, overthrowing democratic and capitalist institutions.

＞With the Soviet Union occupying much of Eastern and Central Europe, many in the U.S. feared of communist expansion and invasioned (→invasion) the federal governent (→government).
⇒「より具体的には」、「共産主義者がアメリカに侵入し拡張するのを恐れた」というような文言で結ぶのも一案と思います。
→More concretely, with the Soviet Union occupying much of Eastern and Central Europe, many in the U.S. feared communist invading and expanding in America.
＊なお、「～を恐れる」は、"be afraid of ～", "have fear of ～", "fear ～"などで表わせます。（fear を動詞として用いる場合、of は不要です）。

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初めの文に比べ、だいぶ短くなりました！
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