添削お願いします。

質問

英語の自己紹介文です。
ビデオレターで送らなくてはいけないのですが…
添削よろしくお願いいたします。

Let me introduce myself.
My name is ***.
But please call me （あだ名） because the chinese character for my name is (漢字で自分の名前が書いてある紙を見せながら) this.
In japanese, this pronunces （本名）.
But also pronunces （あだ名）.

My hobby is ristening to music.
Above all, （好きなグループ名） are most interesting for me.
If you know these groups, let's talk about it with me!!

And I'm pretty good at Japanese calligraphy.
I'm trying hard to become a "Shihan" or an instracter.

I am not very good at English.
But I am going to try to communicate with you as hard as I can.
So feel free to talk to me.
I am looking forward to the day which can meet you.
That's all.
Thank you!!

よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

papasan33 · ベストアンサー

私もあまり自信はないので、参考程度にしてくださいね。
（勝手に創作してしまった部分もあります。また一部手抜きしたところも
あります。すみません^^;）

Let me introduce myself.
My name is ***.
And my nickname is "あだ名".
I'd like to explain the origin of my nickname to you.
The chinese character for my name is (漢字で自分の名前が書いてある紙を見せながら) this.
In Japanese, we usually pronunce it （本名）.
But it can also be pronunced （あだ名）.
One day, my classmate called me（あだ名）by mistake and all of my classmates laughed at that.
Since then, they got to call me（あだ名） instead of my real name.
Please remember my nickname and call me by it.

My hobby is listening to the music.
Above all, （好きなグループ名） are my favorite musicians.
If you know these groups, let's talk about them with me!!

And I'm pretty good at Japanese calligraphy.
I'm trying hard to become a "Shihan" or an instructor.

I am not so good at English.
But I'm studying it hard so that I can communicate fully with you.
So feel free to talk to me.
I am looking forward to the day when I can meet you.
That's all.
Thank you!!