アラン・リックマン様にファンレターを書いてみました

質問

前の質問で回答していただいた方を参考に自分で書いてみたのですが
英語も習ったばかりだし、何より苦手で滅茶苦茶な気がします・・・。
まったく読めないかもしれません・・・
でもどうしても書きたくて本を見たりネットで検索してやってみました！
アドバイス、修正、例、お願いします！！

Mr.Alan Rickman

Hello!my name is 名前　苗字.
kendo to learring fourteenis a woman.

i'm love yuo dearly.

for the first time Mr.Alan Rickman to you know
「Galaxy☆Quest」 lnterestng and Atempo is Good you lcae to like you.
「Harry potter」Look the part snape Good
it was wohderful.

Elsewhere 「Love very much but uhtil uhtil sleep」to llooked.

l hope you'll fihd time to visit iapan someday to see us.

I'm looking to toforward to seeing your new movie
Please take care of yourself.

i'd really appreciate it if you could send me your
autographed photograp

Sincerely'名前　苗字

ちなみに作品名は上から
「ギャラクシー☆クエスト」「ハリーポッター」「愛しい人が眠るまで」です。

回答No.1

marbleshit

Dear Mr.Alan Rickman

Hello! My name is 名前　苗字.
I'm a woman who's been learning kendo since 14.
I love you so dearly.
For the first time I want you to know that,
"Galaxy☆Quest" is interestng and its tempo is good to me,
so that I began to like you.
And also the snake God part of "Harry potter" is wonderful.
So I couldn't forget it until I went into sleep.
I hope you make some time for visiting to Japan to see us someday.
Honestly I'm looking forward to seeing your new movie.
Please take care of yourself.
And at the end, I'd really appreciate if you could give me your portrait with your sign on.

Yours Sincerely,
名前　苗字

お礼

訂正ありがとうございますっっ！！
こちらはアプリか何かでしょうか?(#^.^#)