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My First Childhood Memory: Visiting Kyoto and Being Amazed
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- When I was three years old, my family took a trip to Kyoto. We visited famous temples and shrines and I was captivated by their beauty. Seeing my parents enjoy themselves made me happy too.
- My first childhood memory is going to Kyoto with my family when I was three. We explored the city and visited stunning temples and shrines. Their beauty left a lasting impression on me.
- As a child, I had the opportunity to visit Kyoto with my family. I was only three at the time, but the sight of the famous temples and shrines left me in awe. It was a memorable experience for all of us.
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My first childhood memory is to go to Kyoto with my family when I was three years old. →My first childhood memory is going to Kyoto with my family when I was three years old. We saw famous temples and shrines in Kyoto. →OKです。 I was moved by how beautiful they were. →I was moved by their beauty. / I was moved when I found them very beautiful. My paewnts looked enjoyable,so I also felt so.(43字) →My parents looked pleased, and I also felt so. 43語 字ではない 以上でいかがでしょうか？
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