My First Childhood Memory: A Trip to Kyoto

2013/02/04 12:20

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My first childhood memory is going on a trip to Kyoto with my family when I was three years old. We visited famous temples and shrines and I was amazed by their beauty. It was a joyful experience for my parents and me.
Looking back at my childhood, one of my fondest memories is the trip my family took to Kyoto. I was just three years old, but I can still recall the stunning temples and shrines we visited. The beauty and serenity of Kyoto left a lasting impression on me.
As a young child, I had the opportunity to visit Kyoto with my family. The ancient temples and shrines we explored were truly mesmerizing. I remember being awestruck by their intricate architecture and peaceful atmosphere. It was a trip filled with wonder and joy.

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2013/02/04 13:24 回答No.1

十分だと思います。明らかな英語の間違いを１つだけ指摘すれば、最後の行です。 enjoyable というのは、楽しいものを主語にした時の言葉です。たとえば The movie was enjoyable to us. 書き直すとしたら、 My parents seemed to enjoy looking at them. I had a great time, too. とかですかね。

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