大学受験英作文

質問

すこし構文を増やしてみました。…使いこなせませんが。

最近、インターネットが盛んになったせいか、本を端から端まで読む人が少なくなったのは残念です。

It is a pity that there are few people now to read a book carefully ,propably because of getting Internet more popular .

人とのつきあいのように途中でいろいろなことを感じたり、思いがけない発見をしたりできるところが読書の面白さです。

The pleasure of reading is feeling many things and finding something you had not thought on the way to such as connection with other people .

よろしくお願いします

回答No.1

angkolwhat · ベストアンサー

It is a pity that there are few [people now to read→people who read through] a book carefully, probably because [of getting Internet more popular→the Internet has recently become very popular].
"because of"名詞句にする方が楽そうですが，"because..."副詞節の法が文が簡単になります．

The pleasure of reading [books] is [feeling many things and finding something→to feel and find things] you [had→have] not thought [on the way→of] [to such as connection→just like you interact] with other people.
"think of"と"interact with"は必須です．

お礼

ありがとうございました。追い込みがんばります。