下の英文で間違っているところ、不自然な表現、あまり聞かない表現などがあ
下の英文で間違っているところ、不自然な表現、あまり聞かない表現などがあればおしえてください。
One Saturday evening my boyfriend Hiroshi and I went to a concert.
On our way to a concert hall, we met a foreigner having(carrying?) a traveling bag.
He was looking around for something with a map in his hand.
He seemed at a loss for which way to go.
Then I went up and talked to him.
He told me he was looking for a hotel, showing me the map.I
I knew where the hotel was and suggested to him that I take him there.
Hiroshi seemed worried about whether we could arrive before the starting time for a concert.
But I couldn't leave him as he was a total stranger here and couldn't understand Japanese at all.
We walked to the hotel for a while, and arrived there.
He deeply thanked me and we separated.
Meanshile, Hiroshi seemed so irritated because it was almost seven o'clock when the concert was scheduled to begin.
After leaving the hotel, we went to the concert hall in a hurry.
When we got to the hall, it was fifteen minutes past seven.
Unfortunately we were not allowed to enter the inside by a hall clerk.
Naturally, Hiroshi got mad at me.
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丁重なご回答誠にありがとうございます！ 熟語表現で用いるのですね＾＾ ありがとうございます！