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お願いします。HOLESと言う小説を使って今授業を受けています
以下内容を提出しようとしているのですが文法を添削いただけると助かります、よろしくお願いします

TEXT-SELF: In Holes, Stanley is able to take a shower only 4 minutes. In my case, I always take a long shower more than 20 minutes. For environment, I had better follow their Camp rule.

TEXT-TEXT: In Holes, Stanley found a fossil of fish. In National Geographic said, the fossil
hand of a long-neched, ostrich-like dinosaur recently found in China may help solve the mystery of how bird wings eveloped from dinosaur limbs. (ソースは添付します)

TEXT-WORLD: In Holes, Stanley drink water importantly. In the world, there are drought many
places in the world and desert spread like wild fire across the globe. Now we have to act something as soon as possible, otherwise, the earth's climate might be strange.

回答No.1

ohioan4506 · ベストアンサー

[ ]は変えたところです。

TEXT-SELF: In Holes, Stanley is able to take a shower [for] only 4 minutes. In my case, I always take a long shower [for] more than 20 minutes. For [the] environment, I [should] follow their Camp rule.

TEXT-TEXT: In Holes, Stanley found a fossil of fish. [One article in National Geographic] said, [a hand] of a long-necked, ostrich-like dinosaur [fossils] [was] recently found in China, [and it] may help solve the mystery of how bird wings developed from dinosaur limbs. (ソースは添付します)

TEXT-WORLD: In Holes, Stanley [drinks] water importantly. [There are droughts in many places] in the world and [deserts] [keep spreading] like wild fire across the globe. Now we have to act something as soon as possible, otherwise, the earth's climate might be [changing much more than before.]

お礼

大変丁寧に回答ありがとうございます
複数にし忘れが多いので気をつけようと思いました
また是非機会がありましたらよろしくお願いします